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It wasn't my intention to say anything regarding the three poems featured in this post, but I have already received two messages asking me to do so, so I'll just say a few brief words about each of them.

'A Christmas Card for Mum' is, of course, a poem for my mother, who is sadly no longer with us. I miss her very much. And I did, in fact, send a Christmas card to the graveyard where she is buried, because I knew she'd like that, if she is still there somewhere disguised as a robin - the great symbol of renewal and rebirth.

'Priorities' is a poem I wrote during the Covid outbreak, outlining the importance of family members in our lives, especially children - and how we should cherish them above wealth and power and material things - which pale into insignificance in comparison.

'Stardust' is a poem dedicated to my friend, Bob Zisk, who perpetually endeavours to write poems of the highest quality imaginable. So my poem, rather inevitably, becomes a discussion of what that quality is. In other words, what differentiates a great poem from a mediocre one? If anybody has any thoughts regarding this, or anything else, please share them.

Happy Christmas, my friends!

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Martin, Merry Christmas! I think this may be the poem to which you referred. I hope it still pleases:

Seneca by Moonlight

Clouds dispersed. The evening air grew still.

Crickets were silent. Coyotes did not howl,

And the crowns of the dark trees stood mute and tall,

Unswayed by the low piping of an owl.

October held her court among the stars,

And all the night paid homage. And I stood

Alone, as overhead the circling Bears

Ran in the plain of the Milky Way's flood.

Lords and ladies in tales already old

When old Mycenae was but a string around

A plot of dirt, traced their way through the cold

Autumn night, and a meandering wind

Murmured names and tales as vast as time

Itself. The Queen sat stately in her chair,

The Moon, cream white, ascended through her climb,

As pure as death and birth in the cold air.

And I, who've walked in the glow of their far flung light,

Exhaled a silver fog of spirit and dreams

That spiraled, curled, and wound into this night,

Drawn by tethers of stardust and moonbeams.

There is a place for me, perhaps, out there

Among the speckled swales of indigo,

And someday, when my smoke is blown through the clear

Breadth of night, I will draw the Archer's bow

And shoot an arrow across this galaxy,

And when it sinks in the wide ocean of space,

I'll walk the Dogs across the jeweled sky,

And in startrails and moonshine find my place.

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