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Tom Merrill's avatar

"...the vast indifference that...will not be denied" captures life's essence.

"...the longing for oblivion..." is an all too familar feeling.

"Lovemaker" could suggest an eventual embrace of asceticism.

Glad you republished them Shannon.

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

'The Lovemaker', in my opinion, is not so much a poem about love, or love-making, but rather a sharp and candid meditation on the nature of lust and how it can remain 'forever unsatisfied' if that is all there is to a relationship and its 'rootless' conjoinings.

So, who then is the speaker here? Is it the male participant in the love-ritual that is being enacted in stanza two, before he moans 'at last' and falls asleep?

Perhaps it is. Or, more accurately, some aspect of the speaker's higher self that once indulged in scenes such as this one, before he learned to remove his spiritual side just far enough to see how the body, after experiencing moments of intense enthralling pleasure, rests only briefly, then ...

'Wakes in the chains it wore,

Dishevelled, stupid, cold,

And famished as before.'

In other words, a total slave to lust and the constant animal cravings that go with it, when desire is not a physical expression of what a lover feels for another person.

So now, even though lust still seizes the speaker occasionally, he has not allowed it to be a 'constant fault', or one that would make him less than a full person - a mere ghostly figure, or a piece of 'Anonymous carrion / Ravished by despair.'

What a truly remarkable poem this is! It is no less than a candid tour-de-force on lust, love, relationships, and spirituality.

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